
Heliopolis courtyard
Initial noteOne of the five original Heliopolis illustrations used as the style reference.
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Initial noteOne of the five original Heliopolis illustrations used as the style reference.
Initial noteOne of the five original Heliopolis illustrations used as the style reference.

Initial noteOne of the five original Heliopolis illustrations used as the style reference.

Initial noteOne of the five original Heliopolis illustrations used as the style reference.

Initial noteOne of the five original Heliopolis illustrations used as the style reference.

Initial noteEarly scene with the original palette and open space, though more detailed than the five originals.

Initial noteEarly scene with the original palette and open space, though more detailed than the five originals.

Initial noteEarly scene with the original palette and open space, though more detailed than the five originals.

Initial noteEarly scene with the original palette and open space, though more detailed than the five originals.

Initial noteOne spare span and restrained color; the railing is still rather regular.

Initial noteOne small focal object with little color; the contour is still very even.

Initial noteThe extra ornament is gone; hanging shapes remain slightly precise.

Initial noteA quieter desk and window with more open space than the earlier version.

Initial noteThe arches are simplified but still read as measured geometry.

Initial noteThe little work scene is airy, but its forms and original subject need another look.

Initial noteA quiet window and chair; the line remains a little polished.

Initial noteThe dome and sun are still heavier and more architectural than the originals.

Initial noteThe greenhouse framework remains too regular and technical.

Initial noteThe scene is simpler, but its thick furniture contours still differ from the originals.

Initial noteThe facade remains symmetrical and finely ruled.

Initial noteThe pink is gone and the arch has much more breathing room.

Initial noteThe tile shape still reads as a precise emblem rather than a loose detail.

Initial noteThe stairs and coastal cue remain a little postcard-like.

Initial noteThe landmark geometry still feels too crisp.

Initial noteA small restrained LA cue; linework could be less uniform.

Initial noteThe compass face retains a technical, precise icon treatment.

Initial noteThe prism and lens are simple, but their geometry remains sharp.

Initial noteThe desk scene has a calmer palette and room around it.

Initial noteThe terrace keeps one focal idea and a light, open setting.

Initial noteA quieter science corner with a single point of attention.

Initial noteThe doorway remains strongly symmetrical and mechanical.

Initial noteThe ferry is cleaner, but still a crisp diagram-like icon.

Initial noteThe stairs still read as technical drafting.

Initial noteThe span is open and the foliage restrained.

Initial noteThe post and rail remain too geometric.

Initial noteThe tower's structural grid has a very regular line.

Initial noteThe object is useful, but the contour is still too smooth.

Initial noteThe terrace has an airy composition, with a little more precise line than the originals.

Initial noteThe small worktable feels quiet and lightly colored.

Initial noteThe science desk is calm, but the window and instrument feel diagrammatic.

Initial noteA small, open scene with restrained color.

Initial noteThe notebook and magnifier are concise but still vector-like.

Initial noteKeep the object; remove the doubled blue edge and simplify small detail.

Initial noteKeep the object; remove the doubled blue edge and simplify small detail.

Initial noteSimple object, restrained palette and generous empty space; compare at intended size.

Initial noteKeep the object; remove the doubled blue edge and simplify small detail.

Initial noteSimple object, restrained palette and generous empty space; compare at intended size.

Initial noteKeep the object; remove the doubled blue edge and simplify small detail.

Initial noteSimple object, restrained palette and generous empty space; compare at intended size.

Initial noteSimple object, restrained palette and generous empty space; compare at intended size.

Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteLayered arches and vines make the scene too intricate.
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Initial noteLayered arches and vines make the scene too intricate.
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Initial noteCyan/dark dome and detailed planting overpower the original palette.

Initial noteCyan/dark dome and detailed planting overpower the original palette.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteKeep the composition; reduce foliage, floor lines and blue shadow outlines.
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Initial noteReduce the city to one recognizable cue and a quiet foreground.
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Initial noteThe large solid navy curtain feels heavier than the airy original rooms.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteReduce the city to one recognizable cue and a quiet foreground.
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Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the useful subject; thin the outline and remove blue shadow/fill.

Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with fewer props, quieter planting and more cream space.
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Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with fewer props, quieter planting and more cream space.
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Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with fewer props, quieter planting and more cream space.

Initial noteKeep the motif; simplify linework and remove blue accents or small flourishes.

Initial noteDotted orbit and star flourishes add a decorative icon language.

Initial noteFloating cards and star read as a diagram, not an original Heliopolis object.

Initial noteKeep the motif; simplify linework and remove blue accents or small flourishes.

Initial noteKeep the motif; simplify linework and remove blue accents or small flourishes.

Initial noteKeep the motif; simplify linework and remove blue accents or small flourishes.

Initial noteKeep the motif; simplify linework and remove blue accents or small flourishes.

Initial noteCyan optics and geometric rays feel too technical and sharp.

Initial noteKeep the motif; simplify linework and remove blue accents or small flourishes.

Initial noteStars and dotted chart introduce a decorative celestial language.

Initial noteKeep the motif; simplify linework and remove blue accents or small flourishes.

Initial noteKeep the motif; simplify linework and remove blue accents or small flourishes.

Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with fewer props, quieter planting and more cream space.
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Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with fewer props, quieter planting and more cream space.

Initial noteLandscape color, texture and distance feel like a different illustration system.
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Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with one focal idea and much less architectural or symbolic detail.
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Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with one focal idea and much less architectural or symbolic detail.

Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with one focal idea and much less architectural or symbolic detail.
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Initial noteKeep the object; simplify linework, secondary symbols and blue accents.

Initial noteThe solid navy curtain is too dominant for a small accent.

Initial noteFloating symbolic cards feel like a diagram rather than a drawn place or object.

Initial noteAbstract points lack the recognizable, grounded subject of the original art.

Initial noteBook, bridge, leaf and star compress too many symbols into one mark.

Initial noteKeep the object; simplify linework, secondary symbols and blue accents.

Initial noteAbstract ribbon language and blue fill differ from the original line art.

Initial noteOrbit/question symbol is more decorative and abstract than the original art.

Initial noteConcentric rings and star accent feel like a separate icon system.

Initial noteStar flourish and abstract transformation add unnecessary symbolism.

Initial noteKeep the object; simplify linework, secondary symbols and blue accents.

Initial noteKeep the object; simplify linework, secondary symbols and blue accents.

Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with one focal idea and much less architectural or symbolic detail.
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Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with one focal idea and much less architectural or symbolic detail.
New drawing shown. The previous version is in redrawn/; earlier style notes may describe that older image.

Initial noteKeep the subject; rebuild with one focal idea and much less architectural or symbolic detail.
New drawing shown. The previous version is in redrawn/; earlier style notes may describe that older image.

Initial noteKeep the setting; rebuild with less architecture, foliage and cyan/dark fill.
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Initial noteRibbon and flower motif feels more ornamental than the original work objects.

Initial noteBlue water and patterned tile add extra color and detail.

Initial noteKeep the object; simplify its outline and remove extra blue accents.

Initial noteKeep the object; simplify its outline and remove extra blue accents.

Initial noteStar charms and hanging cards are too decorative for the original direction.

Initial noteKeep the object; simplify its outline and remove extra blue accents.

Initial noteStarburst and tile border form a new ornamental vocabulary.

Initial noteAbstract stepping-stone symbol feels separate from the original spatial scenes.

Initial noteKeep the setting; rebuild with less architecture, foliage and cyan/dark fill.
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Initial noteKeep the setting; rebuild with less architecture, foliage and cyan/dark fill.
New drawing shown. The previous version is in redrawn/; earlier style notes may describe that older image.

Initial noteKeep the setting; rebuild with less architecture, foliage and cyan/dark fill.
New drawing shown. The previous version is in redrawn/; earlier style notes may describe that older image.

Initial noteKeep the setting; rebuild with less architecture, foliage and cyan/dark fill.
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Initial noteKeep the setting; rebuild with less architecture, foliage and cyan/dark fill.
Initial noteLandmark facade and palm are rendered with too many small architectural lines.
Initial noteBright pink is outside the original cream/navy/lime palette.
Initial noteYellow fruit and blue patterned tile expand the palette and detail level.
Initial noteCyan sea, heavy palm and layered depth are too scenic for a small icon.
Initial noteDetailed landmark, dome and hill read as a postcard miniature.
Initial noteKeep the LA cue; simplify the linework and return to cream/navy/lime.
Initial noteKeep the NYC cue; simplify the linework and return to cream/navy/lime.
Initial noteBoat, waves and full skyline are too much information for one icon.
Initial noteBrickwork and metal stairs are much denser than the original linework.
Initial noteDense foliage, bridge detail and blue water crowd the mark.
Initial noteKeep the NYC cue; simplify the linework and return to cream/navy/lime.
Initial noteTower plus skyline and foliage makes the icon a busy scene.

Initial noteExact image in the original five package; a file copy, not a new design.
Initial noteExact image in the original five package; a file copy, not a new design.

Initial noteExact image in the original five package; a file copy, not a new design.

Initial noteExact image in the original five package; a file copy, not a new design.

Initial noteExact image in the original five package; a file copy, not a new design.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld first redraw: cropped or oversimplified composition and heavier vector line than the original art.

Initial noteHeld test: curtain and room still feel too heavy.

Initial noteHeld test: the room retains too much detail.

Initial noteOpaque dark-surround trial caused by a misleading alpha preview.

Initial noteExact image reused in the later redraw set. The dome and sun are still heavier and more architectural than the originals.

Initial noteExact image reused in the later redraw set. The pink is gone and the arch has much more breathing room.

Initial noteHeld test: lettering and mechanical linework drift from the originals.

Initial noteThe style reference displaced the requested prism-and-lens subject.

Initial noteHeld test: the optics remain crisp and technical.

Initial noteHeld test: subject is restored, but drawing still feels mechanical.

Initial noteOpaque dark-surround trial caused by a misleading alpha preview.

Initial noteExact image reused in the later redraw set. The desk scene has a calmer palette and room around it.

Initial noteExact image reused in the later redraw set. The tower's structural grid has a very regular line.

Initial noteRejected target-guided edit: dense forms and hard line/fill remain unlike the originals.

Initial noteRejected target-guided edit: dense forms and hard line/fill remain unlike the originals.

Initial noteRejected target-guided edit: dense forms and hard line/fill remain unlike the originals.

Initial noteRejected target-guided edit: dense forms and hard line/fill remain unlike the originals.